14th Feb, 2020: Meenal Sutaria
A peer review on the narratives written by us helped us in understanding the areas where we could improve. We also got to know how there could be different ways in which the descriptions of various things could change or improvised.
It is important to understand the writer’s perspective and what the explanations try to convey. At the same time, if the reader can relate to it and understand it.
Theses are the narratives written by me:
This is the review I received for my narratives:
The review received for my narratives helped me in understanding how I could bring about certain improvements and that would make it expressive. The essay had to describe the city as well as the perspective of the people living in it. Since all of these were imaginary cities, it was important to make it engrossing for the reader. And at the same time, it had to be understandable.
Therefore, it was important to keep all these factors in mind while writing the narratives.
The Idealist 